The goal is to make her want to learn more about you.
Also, don't write down too much detailed personal information, because strangers may be able to use it to look you up on google or facebook and find out details that you may not want them to know.
Your goal is to be perceived as a person who is interesting and fun, not someone who is dull or creepy.
Instead, go with something witty and unique that either creates intrigue or makes someone laugh.6) Don't Be Too Serious - You're Not Applying For a Job!A common mistake that guys make when writing a profile, is that they treat it as if it's a resume or job application.In the previous section, we showed you how to select great photos for your profile.Now it's time to write a kick-ass bio that describes how awesome you are!
By writing a serious profile, they often come across as too desperate.